Tuesday, April 29, 2008

Butterflies Comments

Rating: 5.0

The withered sparkle-chips on earth spawn
Caterpillars ere butterflies shrunk in cocoon and cocoon
Swarm with myriad colours out when born
Success of ascension, patterned designs strewn
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Indira Renganathan
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wael karameh 18 August 2009

very nice topic and excellent way of writing.

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Excellent write on butterflies that transform from ugly inspects to the most colourful ones, in one of the wonders of nature's metamorphosis - with the underlying message to the human to learn from them.

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Raj Nandy 18 May 2009

A butterfly only a creature of the 'moment', has enough time to dance and sing and lay its eggs on the leaves of Spring, for the cycle of life to begin! 10+ -Raj Nandy

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 23 April 2009

Great Poem, captures the essence of life of man and butterfly - 'but for a brief moment it's glory and beauty belong to us....'excellent, thank you.

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Seema Aarella 17 February 2009

The cycle of events of our life compared with that of a butterfly, all too good, skillful change in style of the poem, a pleasant read! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I would like to thank you Madam, for all the beautiful and encouraging comments you pass on my poems! ! ! ! ! !

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