Butterflies Comments

(cont.) OH! I pointed out that typo 4 years ago. Here in the NC 'hills', along the gravel road leading to our home, we see many butterflies some days. : ) bri : )

' It's '....I caught you, Savita! ! ! Go with 'Its', of course, though I too have been 'GUILTY' of the same typo at times. : )))

oh the so lovely verbs you chose for the delicate flutterbys! ! ! you have set them to dancing in our minds and we thank you for the God-inspired words---top marks and a fav

Boy, those butterflies DO multiply! ! bri :) Alas. " its" not " it's" , my friend. ha ha.

I love butterflies flying over flowers. I love to hear flute of my child Lord. His flute motivates me. Hare Krishna,

poetic mind enjoying here all beautiful where the earthly butterflies shining all like the divine angels

Butterflies and flowers become unable to identify because of their similarity in colour. There is a poem in Malayalam, " Look mother, lot of flowers are flying off from this vine..." Its a coversation between a child and its mother, in which to the child the flying butterflies seem to be flowers themselves. Thank you Savitaji for rewinding the childhood. Full score.

A beautifully crafted write with compelling imagery. This marvelous poem made me at close range with the beautiful butterfly and lovely jasmine. Top Marks! !

Butterflies on Jasmine flowers give us pleasant moments and glee to us. The inscription about this is so nicely inscribed by you. Thank you dear madam. Full vote or five stars.

I see them fluttering and playing music and dancing around, Great imagery created. Awesome.5 Stars

Such a beautiful poem on Jasmine and the butterfly. Short and sweet one. Thanks for sharing.