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u have had ur say read my bestest poem MOMS SMILES NOW YOU MAY Have a memeorable day if u have nothing else to do read more of my poems today I will too

beautiful stanza- Joy and pain, our compatibilities. Guilt and shame, our motivations. All these bought into the game, Freedom we seek for we've laid claim./// written beautiful poem

A great start with a nice poem, Thomas. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks