Friday, November 23, 2012

Butterflies Comments

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The stage is set
The risers placed
Rehearsals done
Butterflies should be in bed.
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Kim Barney 09 January 2015

Wonderful metaphors used here. I like your style of writing.

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* Sunprincess * 16 July 2014

...........wow very nice write.....and the perfect metaphor for those moments of stage fright....

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Rachel Branscombe 02 December 2012

I liked your writing it is so true that we have at times

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Asif Andalib 26 November 2012

Beautiful write. I enjoyed it

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Lyn Paul 24 November 2012

So well written we all have butterflies at times in our life, such imagination who would have thought of these words. Well done.

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