Thursday, September 21, 2017

Buttercups And Daisies Comments

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In mid-year when the grass was thin
The buttercups would gild the fields
But when the hay was gathered in
Daisy-dust each swathe revealed.
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Keith Shorrocks Johnson
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Bri Edwards 19 April 2018

i 'had to' Google gild to check spelling; you are correct, of course. and tare to check definition; i'd heard of tare weight but didn't know about it meaning a certain plant. i believe i've figured out tide-mark neck, partly due to my youth's experience with butter cups. i also knew of daisy chains from years ago. and dandelion bracelets. EATING TIME HERE. the poem to MyPoemList. A very nice one. bri :)

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Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken 21 September 2017

Beautiful poem Keith Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 September 2017

The book of time reserves forever. Time recognizes flowers. Amazing poem is very well drafted and shared here.10

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Keith Shorrocks Johnson

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