Sunday, May 6, 2018

Butter Comments

Rating: 5.0

He was the one who was serious.
And she was witty and curious.
But she touched his spirit like no other.
And their relationship was smooth as coconut butter.
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Lamar Cole
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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 May 2018

The depiction of the poem has made the title appropriate. The beginning is enchanting. Each line is haunting. Beautiful poem.10

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