But You Did Not Let Me Comments

I touched your deception in this poem! ! ! short but soooooo emotional I felt it inside...

sad........ but live out in poetry.................

it's like a small flower, but with a great willpower.. nice

such a timid poem, yet so strong

Short and to the point. Your tone of sadness exists as always...keep writing! (well done)

that what is happening when you love someone you make all your life for him but he doesn't let you live or fell happy in this life. good work, nice poem

special love a confluent. flow between two. both imagination are captured. u have expressed finely yr thoughts.......10+

The last line of your poem seems unnecessary. I think it would be better if you said, And it was so painful instead of And I didn’t want to.

A sad poem, Sadly our dreams don't always come true... Andy