Tuesday, December 15, 2020

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My ego wants to be better than you
it wants to conquer and always win
it forms a layer on my being
that seems to cover a treasure within
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Aufie Zophy
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Khairul Ahsan 15 December 2020

The poem spreads out a very positive message; 'make a hole in your heart so that the stored up ego can break out and vanish, and through that hole our conscience and soul can come out 'as a flower spreading fragrance and beauty'. Loved your poem.

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