Monday, April 17, 2006

But Why? Comments

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You did not hesitate,
big hands you have,
they did not care
about the world
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 22 April 2006

Whatever the situation that put you here my frien will pass. You will be stronger and wiser in the end.

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kskdnj sajn 17 April 2006

Sorry you were ever put in a situation that lead you to have to write a poem with so much sadness. There is nothing more painful than to endure the loss of respect and severe disapointment inflicted from a family member. With so many strengths... my faith that you will persevere. Much Luv. XO Angie

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Mike Finley 17 April 2006

Peace and courage, Herbert

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Gina Onyemaechi 17 April 2006

Yes, the hurt in these words leaps out and bites. I just wish this hurt was not really your own, Herbs. Love and kindness to you, Gina.

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Raynette Eitel 17 April 2006

This is a departure from your usual light-hearted fare and I find this perhaps more real than all the rest. The pain is palpable and the images very real. Beautiful write, Herbert.

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