Thursday, September 6, 2018

But Why Comments

Rating: 5.0

Few things in life
you wish at midnight
Morning it disappears
like the mist in sunlight
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Rini Shibu
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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 August 2022

Everything happens In front of your eyes And you ask yourself but why? There is no answer to your question dear poetess!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 September 2018

yes and we all do when you fly above and don't now come to encourage lonesome poets poor like poet me once you knew now you also fly high above the blue sky.....How does a silent beautiful flower speak apart from PH OBJECTS more than 300 words here so do come to myy age if you wish to do so

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Edmund Strolis 07 September 2018

The saying goes that life is what happens when we are busy making plans. We temper ourselves and become distrustful of patience. Surely to turn just one more page an answer or an expectation will be found or met and yet like the mist and the rainbow they seem to be illusions, doubt darkens the colors but we always retain hope like a gold coin tightly held. The feeling reminding us that we have something special to give.

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Kostas Lagos 07 September 2018

Lovely poem Rini. Loved its melancholy

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 September 2018

Rini, such an excellent poem.......................

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Lamar Cole 07 September 2018

This is a very good and thought provoking poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2018

Few wishes those come at night disappear at morning time. Such act is amazing and confusion. A brilliant poem is shared.10

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Carl Roussell 06 September 2018

Very good writing, a 10.

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Unnikrishnan E S 06 September 2018

Wow! Lovely poem...dreamscapes disappear...but life ebbs and flows..

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