Wednesday, September 2, 2015

But The Rose Flower Left Me Alone Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh cute! Deaf and dumb! Why are you mute?
Where is your music? Don’t have a flute?
Any other instrument, will you please play?
From beauty like you, don’t like a nay.
...
Read full text

COMMENTS
Rajnish Manga 04 November 2016

An amazing poem unfolding various beautiful shades of nature in which things around us appear to be in love with each other. Thanks, Akhtar jawad Sahab. I quote: I see a colorful flying butterfly / You are on earth and I want to fly, I want to see the blue sky /... but the rose flower has left me alone!

0 0 Reply
Valsa George 04 September 2015

This sounds so very beautiful Akhtarji! It has carried me to some magic isle on the view less wings of imagination, though I don't fully understand what you speak of! A 10

1 0 Reply
Kelly Kurt 02 September 2015

The romantic poet has penned another rose of a poem!

1 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul 02 September 2015

Fantastic depiction. Amusing and interesting. Fasvourite lines.......I am enchanted with my bud’s lovely sweet tone, but the rose flower has left me alone! . thanks for sharing. .....10

1 0 Reply
Khalida Bano Ali 02 September 2015

A beautiful imagery but I see it symbolic...............................10

1 0 Reply
Akhtar Jawad

Akhtar Jawad

Gorakhpur
Close
Error Success