Oh cute! Deaf and dumb! Why are you mute?
Where is your music? Don’t have a flute?
Any other instrument, will you please play?
From beauty like you, don’t like a nay.
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This sounds so very beautiful Akhtarji! It has carried me to some magic isle on the view less wings of imagination, though I don't fully understand what you speak of! A 10
Fantastic depiction. Amusing and interesting. Fasvourite lines.......I am enchanted with my bud’s lovely sweet tone, but the rose flower has left me alone! . thanks for sharing. .....10
A beautiful imagery but I see it symbolic...............................10
An amazing poem unfolding various beautiful shades of nature in which things around us appear to be in love with each other. Thanks, Akhtar jawad Sahab. I quote: I see a colorful flying butterfly / You are on earth and I want to fly, I want to see the blue sky /... but the rose flower has left me alone!