But That's Over There Poem by M.J. Lemon

But That's Over There

Rating: 5.0

Things are falling apart
the world is not what it used to be
garbage collection is
garbage distribution when
the trucks knock half of it all over
the alley making sure
the dog poop lands right
in my back yard

I know, I know
and look how bad
things are in stores
look at the prices
going up
and credit
what for?
can't make
my payment
deadlines now

Yes, yes
hey, crime is killing us
there's some homeless problem
and don't forget the drugs
they're everywhere
even the government is
pushing them

Right right
read somewhere that some
general is being charged
or something
because he sold something
to the enemy
there's some war somewhere
something about a nuclear bomb...

Of course, of course,
but that's over there
Here we have problems
problems problems
real problems.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 19 April 2024

The world or at least society is falling apart. Climate change the gap between rich and poor, neoliberal ideas all of it is pushing is to the brink. The sad thing is it might be over there but it's coming here.

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M.J. Lemon 26 April 2024

Thank you, Kevn. And I think you are absolutely right. It is coming.

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Savita Tyagi 18 April 2024

Yep! war is somewhere else! Here we have just problems and problems! Just today on my morning walk watched the garbage spill from overflowing can. Spring winds are at fault!

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M.J. Lemon 26 April 2024

Thank you, Savita! And you just reminded me of someone from a long time ago who kept blaming nature for pollution. Yes, all those toxic odours from the plant would not be invading the parks in our old neighbourhood were it not for the winds. Yes, nature did it!

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Richard Wlodarski 18 April 2024

A sad state of affairs interspersed with a tad of sarcasm and wit. You've nailed it, while at the same time, bringing back the focus to the problems in our own country. Excellente, mon ami!

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M.J. Lemon 26 April 2024

Thank you so much, Richard. I think those problems won't be leaving any time soon. There's so much more room for dealing with these sad realities.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 02 April 2024

Mj Crap happens! some people get it more Bravo! ! !

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M.J. Lemon 05 April 2024

And it happens all the time. Thanks for reading, LeeAnn.

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