Friday, January 20, 2012

But Still........... Comments

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Can I ask you for a favour
Please be here with me
I know it’s not possible
But still..........
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Prachi Agrawal
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Dave Walker 20 January 2012

A really great poem, like it. A good write.

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Kumud Ranjan 20 January 2012

feelings are good.. ideas are good, so is the expectation though verbosity is there (as you have repeated two lines regularly in all stanzas) nice beginning...

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