Tuesday, December 29, 2009

But Still... Comments

Rating: 3.0

before you know
i'll be gone from this world
and so from your world too
like a whiff of smoke
...
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indira babbellapati
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Alison Cassidy 02 January 2010

What an exceptional piece, Indira, sharing eloquently the paradox of life and death and the reality of 'unknowing'. Yes, reincarnation is as probable as it is improbable - like all spirituality, I guess. Your poem is honest and bold, sharing your most intimate fears with originality and great skill. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 29 December 2009

this poem has got a nice aura behind it... wonderful. thank you.

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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