Sunday, May 11, 2014

But She Was Touched Comments

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I arose early in the morning, a routine every day,
Washed may hands, brushed my teeth, washed my face,
Cleaned my hair, washed my foot, tried to have a little of the grace,
Proceeded towards light, with a mortal clay.
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Khalida Bano Ali 22 December 2016

A beautiful poem............................................................

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Rajnish Manga 04 November 2016

Everybody follows somewhat the same routine in the morning but you need to have the eyes of a sensitive poet to fall in love with a charming morning. Thanks for sharing.

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Hazel Durham 20 June 2015

So original and imaginative with inspired lines that touch the beauty of nature in it's morning glory! Stunning write!

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Matthias Pantaleon 14 May 2014

Full of metaphor. A very enjoyable read. Every line is a beautiful beyond words

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Ramesh Rai 13 May 2014

Beautiful write sir.love your ink

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