Sunday, November 11, 2007

But Perhaps You Where Never Really Mine At All Comments

Rating: 4.5

I need to know that I will become lost somewhere
Autumn leaves beckon the beguiling smiles of the sun
Just to abandon the rites of the seasons
When their turn has yet to come
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Audrey Stephenson
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Fred Babbin 11 May 2008

Love your metaphors. But sometimes getting what you're saying requires a stretch. And maybe I'm just lazy.

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Winsy Ng 31 December 2007

were you somehow inspired by Garcia Marquez's book? you referenced to it well

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Linda Weischedel 11 November 2007

This was pretty cool. Always, Linda

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Audrey Stephenson

Audrey Stephenson

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