Wednesday, December 20, 2006

But Now I Cannot Stop The Dawn Comments

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It's dawn again, I heard you say
Your tired voice spoke volumes with it's tone
I think you meant the world is black
When you called the moon a worthless stone
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Ben Partenay
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Dee Daffodil 01 June 2007

Ben...You have a magical way with words! Superb poem! ! Hugs, Dee

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Goldy Locks 23 December 2006

Ben, beautiful. what Fowler said. such ease. care, Goldy.

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Sandra Fowler 20 December 2006

Very poignant. Time is elusive, but can be captured by words that echo on forever in the landscapes of the mind. Excellent write, Ben. Warm regards, Sandra

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