But Not To Fly Comments

the madness that i have unleashed with a kiss wait till you gotcha see what you have missed! ! another superb write sadiq...............

this nice poem ends with a soft kissing line...gives mellowing read...good work, Sadiq..10

yeah a passionate one the kiss says it all --10 anjali

I agree...this is a passionate poem. Well done

There is a lot said in this piece Sadiq, very passionately told. The final line is very telling. HG: -) xx