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Needs more work. Hashan Mannan9 minutes ago No clear and well expressed theme or story. Poetic flow is weak. Punctuation are required.

What we desire is difficult to get and what we loose is so easy so if we achieve must thank to Lord Glory to be Allah nice poem with simplicity

To earn name is long process It is great job earned in phases njoyed seldom You have created it by ability Certainly with the blessings from almighty