But My Eyes Comments

my eyes look up but all is empty; but my eyes and such excellence my my my

The best I have read today. As I told you yesterday, you have a unique poetic voice! I love your poetry! Congrats!

nice flow of lines.... smooth... simple and beautiful... nice poem...

nice poem, the beauty in ones eyes, the window to endless possibilities, good one: 0)

Nice poem 10/10 score i hope you will read my poems just keep writing more poems!

Beautiful poem, evocative use of nature - I enjoyed it.

Your eyes go beyond the limits of sight. Beautiful lines. Best wishes.

Parting is such sweet sorrow and sure leaves the eyes drowning in tears a theme that happens so often...well said, regards

so good Especially you started the poem nicely

My 10 for this wonderful composition. Love it.

Very beautiful poem :) very well written! 10++++

all is empty, but my eyes.. they keep on dreaming.. of gorgeous sunrise... rest is lost among your words... like twirling stars around my world...

A good love poem well emoted. you must give your biography for mental communication

nice and romantic with full of emotion, and edgy. Tess

This is really Beautiful and its really nice I really like this bit to my ears; it’s absolute beauty even blue sky could envy pouring her tears, rustling on treetops, deafening we end up running for shed and end up to softness of a bed