But Life Comments

A supreme solution for suicide that is loaded with life! Excellently expressed my friend with rich repetition! 10/10

good write...skillful/imaginative presentation...thanks...10

Another poem easy to read and enjoy. Again your use of repetition is welled phrased and placed.

another beautiful poem. thank you again.

Connie, I find you are an excellent writer. This is again unique and original. I have never looked at life like that but it is true. It will be hard to miss the this things in life. We need to enjoy today. Great use of imagery. You write with compassion and your realistic. Take care.

Thanks For your comments on my work Connie. I have been reading your work its very good. I loved this poem 'but life' it sums the whole thing up beautifully. Seamus

Connie: High marks for this post. will go into my favorite file Charles Garcia

Great poem you should post it on more sites just go to google and look under Tom Zart and you will find many sites that would love to have this poem.