Monday, May 30, 2005
But It Makes Me Lots Of Money Comments
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Cigarette addiction kills people
But it makes me lots of money
It ruins their health
But it makes me lots of money
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David Zvekic
30 May 2005
The 2nd last line is a bit confusing. What if it said 'Why am I allowed to promote and sell such a disgusting product? ' I think that might make more sense. Just my sense, as you have swapped 1st and 2nd person suddenty and then swap back on the last line.
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8/3/2025 12:06:31 AM # 1.0.0
wats more important? Ur health or money? think about it