Friday, July 1, 2011

But It Is The First Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'll maybe miss the fireworks,
But I'm surely missing you.
Temperature too cool out
And there are sirens in the background.
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Benjamin Feliciano
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 01 July 2011

Excellent write with a very strong structure. Great sentiments and incredible imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Regards Akmal

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