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Breathe
Breathe now
We are still here
Living, easy or hard
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Very beautiful poem and heart touching. Tears are blessing and true friends too. Breathe, yes until His wish.
Breathe Breathe Look at me Look at my eyes And confess your pain I'll dissolve all in flowing tears if you can't cry, then let me do Then I will let my tears fall down on my palms Dry on them, as if it going up together with my prayer above Above us.....so touching and impressive. Beautiful poem. My pleasure reading time and again.
It was really a healing experience wiping, washing, consoling and soothing heart pain free. thanks dear soul not unwritten- but written words. readable words console ever than before my 10 plus ++++
The words just flow, Soul. Absolutely magnificent. This is among your very best.
Beautiful words, Soul; an excellent poem that touches and moves the heart.
Thank you dear Hans, i believe if we dont be kind to another then who will start to make life better right...and i know you always gentle and practice this...so we two can relate it.
This is a beautiful reminder that there is always someone to hear and to listen. I am here too for my family. Often so much wasted time on worrying.
Hi Lyn, thanks.. :) sometimes we need to share with someone who we can trust, may we find some help and prayers.. :)
Thank you so much Paul, i really appreciate your kindest word :) thanks!
''Breathe Breathe Look at me Look at my eyes And confess your pain I'll dissolve all in flowing tears if you can't cry, then let me do'' - The repetition of this stanza has such empathetic and soothing healing power, that it almost makes the reader cry...when a human heart is filled with such sufferance, which yet has found its way to be expressed...your poem helps to release that sufferance!
Michaela, that is so nice of you...i think when we tried to understand situation of someone else we may feel that sufference, appreciate with what we have and then come to us to try helping them. The repetition of that stanza is really on the purpose as u can tell..Thanks
Sometimes the pain we feel hurts so much it feels like it will never end, but it does my friend, time is a great healer. A poem full of emotion.
Hi dear Dave, i havent heard from u for long time, a good surprise... :) Yes time is a great healer it just we dont know how much time we still have in our hands, thus if possible its nice to heal and help each other struggles...burden feel lighter and loves will be merrier around the corners.
Pain will go away. The pain you get is temporary. Breathing with love, hope, right mind. happiness, peace and knowledge allows you to get back strength. You can tolerate every situation. Tear falls down on the palm but you can behold emotion. May God help you and also them. Everything has happened secretly. Everything will happen secretly. An amazing and brilliant poem is well penned...10
Thank you dear, you always keep reading and give some positive hopes to me and all..thanks..May God helps all of us
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7/18/2025 7:10:42 PM # 1.0.0
Excellent piece..... wonderful to read....