But, I Wanted To Sing – Comments

A smile and a bow to your poetic endow...

Nice poetic flow 6 beats in every line

sir I really enjoyed this poem, a very original and interesting piece of work...10

Excellent Ed. I love the twist.

I digested it well but it was short. Anyway, t'was great, it helps my brain to exercise today.I need it.

Great Eddie, Lovely write 10

E ven the birds d are sing d o it for fun i n expressions e ven if it is for yourself

A superb manifestation of your poetic inclination. thanks for sharing. melvin

Very original point of view and manner in expressing it.

The poet will eventually sing whatever the circumstances, Very original write. Kind regards, Sandra

its nice to relieve that dyschezia...and able to sing..

A very informative write I could just picture it, although I would have never thought about it. A good write. LOL I enjoyed it Thamks

Another refreshing write form you Eddie different and a pleasure to read, Lynda xx 10

This terse poem was well written and expressed, Eddie. In fact, it remined me of a famous opera tenor who cancelled an appearance in Philadelphia a few years ago because he had an upset stomach and an inflamed esophagus. Stomach and gastro-intestinal disorders can often be debilitating, despite the many over-the-counter remedies for them. Though your words painted an uncomfortable picture in this poem, it was a good one! Carl.

very nice lines enjoyed them.

hello po. galing nyo naman with words.. galing! =)

THOUGHT PROVOKING VERSE WRITTEN WITH A VERY FINE IMAGERY...10+++