Thursday, November 29, 2018

But I Still Love You Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm tired, and out-of-sorts
The day has taken its toll
It's not yet time for bed,
But here I am, feeling old.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 November 2018

A wonderful poem that captures the eternality of love. A vivid portrayal of love and devotion. Beautifully crafted write.

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Practicing Poetess 29 November 2018

Thank you so much, Rose Marie! I wanted to use 'faithfulness' or 'fidelity' as my poem topic, but it didn't offer me those options.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 November 2018

A tender holding of devotion motivates mind giving great feelings. Love guards life from inside. Motivational force motivates mind. An interesting poem is very beautifully penned...10

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Practicing Poetess 29 November 2018

Thank you, Kumarmani, for reading, your positive comments, and for rating! : -)

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