Monday, August 13, 2012

But I'M Only One Voice Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wish I could tell you
That you're not fat
That you're fine just the way you are
That you're pretty enough
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Danielle Fraser
mom
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Adeline Foster 13 August 2012

Yes, Danielle, it is an excellent poem. It has a lilt to it that showes that you do have a feel for poetry. And I do like your chosen subject and the way you handled it. Read mine - Bloom of Youth- Adeline

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Valerie Dohren 13 August 2012

And a very important voice Danielle - the media has far too much influence. Excellent piece of writing, very insightful.

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