But I’m A Woman Comments

Thanks for such amazing an impromptu. You are right, for we each must has tried to be alone which to atone... Happiness to you dear Sidi.. :)

But I'm a simple man One on whom you must demand The love and trust that is due To a woman such as you. Yet, when the end comes near There is much to fear For each has tried to be alone Leaving much for which to atone. s

a beautiful ink, Tsira.deserves >100.thanks for sharing.

What a marvelous poem, Tsira, It's such a beautifully expessed idea with great images and evocative lines. Very touching, and simply lovely poetry.10+

A limpid poem..chiefly this line...But I’m still reliable…10+

But I’m a woman, Not noticeable, And not overlooked. Rachel Ann Butler

good expressions........finding words to give comments........naturally woman are strongest and woman are the showering love on earth ........

If brief I would like to say that it is undoubtedly a thoughts provoking splendid poem! You are not a woman, you are a person—an outstanding poet. With love 10+++

An awesome expressive poem with fanciful wandering mind. CP

Lovely interpratation of gender Tsira...enjoyed this....thank you...Fi

A nice piece of work Tsira, well worthy of a 10. Best wishes, Andrew

Neither man nor woman, we are person. This is a wonderful poem expressing the gender issue in a poetic manner. My 10 for it.

This is a rather plain poem, so I gave it a plain score. There are a few nice lines in here but that's about it.An interesting opening and closing with a dog. I suppose there is meaning there. GW62

Women is the creator, mother, sister, wife, friend, professional, lover and so many things in one person. We notice everywhere the Phenominal Women nowadays................good writing of deep emotions

Much more than reliable! And a lark, not a sparrow; a waterfall, not a brook. I love this quirky piece> Fx