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Though I not know exactly, Why do I love you, But I know that in no way I cannot be without you..........these lines show the depth of love of a person like you. The immense and fathomless love doesn't allow separation of two hearts. Beautifully crafted poem shared amazingly. Thank u dear Sur for sharing this here.

Lovely Creation. I like to read it. Thanks a lot. Be well always.

Simple, yet beautiful in its own way.

Totally want you to know you have my heartfelt congratulations, Amitava! ! You deserve every bit of it, your poetry is the essence of your being for sure. RoseAnn

An absolutely beautiful poem straight from your Bohemian heart, strumming the heart strings of every woman who reads it, dreaming of a love like you have portrayed in your poem. Fantastic portrait of your love, Amitava! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

A superb write lies here... I enjoyed each line. Sometimes, there's no explanation. for love... it simply is. Congratulations..... by the way, beautiful imagery.

Beautiful write and picture. The last verse just says it all.

Love is a very fickle deity that breathes the most powerful of all human emotions..good poem..

That i love you. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

This is awesome drop about love. Though you feel the sting in your heart you can't leave it. You can't be either in this side or that. Nice poem. Congrats.

So good to read your heartfelt poem on front page. Congratulations Amitav Sur.

Her love is your past, present and future. You defy your existence without her. Nice work. Congrats for POTD.

a beautifully written poem of togetherness that sounds like it is for ever and ever? ..........well penned Amitava

Very touching and heartfelt poem.

Splendid piece of love... Congratulations for poem of the day.. Well deserved

Why do you love her? Why you cannot live without her? How do you show your love to her? You must have liked her before you started loving him? No? Tell us what is so special about her? Can you tell how you feel with her? You use the word love 5 times in your 4 stanza poem. The more you use it, the more love you have for her, is that the way you think. You cannot sink. What does it mean? No other word to rhyme with think? What dealings you are doing that she is not dispensable? What do you advise? Tell us something more. Love poetry is not easy to write. Just few rhyming words and keep on saying love you love you does not make a poem worth reading. Do you read any good poetry? I see you have quiet a few admirers. Perhaps they can help you with critical comments. Is it your time pass (as they say in India!) ? Tell me what love poems have you read except the poems posted here by the members who also say the same: I love you, Iove you I cannot live without you.... There are so many bollywood Indian songs Can you translate some of them into English to show how song writers express love in lyrics? Not criticising you or your love poem, just trying to tell you that you can do a much better job if you ponder over some of the questions I asked and incorporate your answers in you next poem(s) . Good luck. Have fun.

Congratulations for being selected as the Member Poet of the Day.

Love is an enigma. It is ever a puzzling question when there are thousand others, may be more beautiful, more intelligent or more kind, why the beloved holds all attention and life seems meaningless without him/her.A fine poem expressing a lover's heart where true love sparkles.

Such a lovely poem, Amitava.... comgrats for beimg chosen...10+++++