Tuesday, October 30, 2018

But I Kept You Alive Within Me Comments

Rating: 4.8

Since you abandoned and left me alone,
So helplessly I'm wandering, being undone.

Crying aloud and shedding tears and searching all around,
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Amitava Sur
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Khairul Ahsan 23 January 2019

Love and loss are complementary. Loved this poem of unrequited love. Feelings seem to be original. 'I am turned to a clone of mine' - an expression that adequately describes the consequence of lost love.

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Roseann Shawiak 15 January 2019

Amit, I love going back and reading your poetry again, and again. It's like discovering them over and over with new insights that sneak up from the lines of your poetry. Very well done! ! RoseAnn

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Roseann Shawiak 15 January 2019

Another outstanding poem regarding love, Little One! Yes, your love for Rakhee will continue forever through the poems you write. I see an image of Rakhee reading this poem, having a beautiful smile on her face while reading it. Very intense and graceful, a poem of blessing for sure. Thank you for sharing your loving heart in this poem with us. 10 x 10's! ! ! ! RoseAnn

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Roseann Shawiak 02 November 2018

A wonderful poem of true love, Amitava, your feelings of love, sadness and loss are intensely etched in this mind and heart, you were so very fortunate to find a woman like Rakhee to love forever. Great poem!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 October 2018

NICE ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BUT DO US A FAVOUR GIVE RIGHTS TO US TO READ AND QUOTE POEM BY SUR...SIR HAVE you read my Moms Smiles and Mothers Day Today no rights all can read and copy if u so wish a love of a mom' tis SHARE WITH ALL SUR JI WILL U PLEASE

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