But I Do.., Comments

Nice poem Nutty Buddy! I enjoyed it. Beautiful. S.

Cute poem! =^.^= Keep it up, but try making some longer ones. Great job though! : D.

:) sad poem sad feeling, yeah my dear, i'm with you life it's not fear but we can move on it's natural ;) i like the poem, it's censer from your heart keep up Best

First and wonderful attempt, the poem flows from the first line to the last, it's like a lamentation to one's lover, thanks for sharing.