But I Am Busy Tonight ;) Comments

cleverly penned in an updated poetic style, I give you 10/10 and a smile.

A nice and enjoyable read, An up to date type of thought in the last stanza, thank you for writing, Tia

This is a delightful and quite modern poem and puts the reader in mind of a telephone conversation, Tia. It is pretty well written and expressed, a mirror on modern life as denoted by the internet reference. Very clever. Carl.

wow.. and how did it go? i mean with your cyber lover? ...nice poem maria

Hi Tia. Great piece but I think maybe, just maybe you should get out more. well done. Regards Dave T (not interested in his brother)

A cute poem, very nice, like it.

heh...sweet poem...nd srsly...does he hav a brother? ?

See what you started, now Lorrain wants his brother.10+ great piece Doc