Wednesday, March 25, 2015

But Honestly What Do I Believe Comments

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The devil looks after me
He doesn't forsake me
Like an elder brother, he might taunt me
But he promises to love me.
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Mark Heathcote
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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 July 2015

Very nicely envisioned asnd aptly presented. A constructive poem I like most. Thanks for posting.

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Akhtar Jawad 30 March 2015

He wants only to hide our imperfections under a cloverleaf Take away our beliefs so wolves and jackals can all laugh. Interesting poem enjoyed it.....................10

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Kelly Kurt 25 March 2015

An interesting perspective and wording. Thank you for sharing

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Mark Heathcote

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