Friday, August 28, 2015

But He Ran Away (Off Course Love Is A Naughty Boy) Comments

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Every day, I see a new victim of his naught,
but after his every naught,
he runs away!
Off course, love is a naughty boy!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 30 August 2015

Yes, Cupid is a naughty boy! He enjoys sending his shafts in all directions! It can hit anyone, anytime! Age is no bar! Once struck by Cupid's arrow, he will become a poet and begin to write endless verse like this..... Ha... Ha! Enjoyed..... real fun!

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Kelly Kurt 29 August 2015

Off course, Cupid is a blind naughty boy! Great line to end Thanks, Akhtar

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 August 2015

Wonderful imagery. So wisely speculated and nicely depicted. An intensive poem really. Thanks for sharing......10

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Khalid Saifullah 28 August 2015

What an amazing and wonderful poem! ...............................10

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Rajnish Manga 28 August 2015

There is nothing more beautiful and naughty than the presence of this feeling called love. It comes before us in myriad trappings and inducements. Love is ageless and playful. Thanks, Sir.

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