Saturday, September 26, 2020

But Grains Of Sand Comments

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time liquid drips like bright pearl tears making hard rock weep.
fluxing elastic ever exponential moments, minutes, months, years
like eternities breathing outward its soft rhythm is our daily round.
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Paul Brookes
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Terry Craddock 27 September 2020

I still have lecture notes with Romance poets interacting in poems including 'The Rime of the Ancient Mariner' where William Wordsworth changed a few words, a few lines by Samuel Taylor Coleridge. Coleridge did the same for Wordsworth. Poets exchanged poems by letter, we interact and exchange ideas with the internet.

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Terry Craddock 27 September 2020

'time liquid drips like bright pearl tears making hard rock weep. fluxing elastic ever exponential moments, minutes, months, years like eternities breathing outward...' Beautiful lines Paul, it is fitting they relate to a fusion with your poem 'Homage to the Romantics'. Actually interaction by poets is an old wonderful tradition.

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