Sunday, April 26, 2009

But For You. Comments

Rating: 5.0

My days would become
One shade darker.
The sun would be blue,
And, but for you
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Fay Slimm
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Meggie Gultiano 28 April 2009

a ery beautiful emotional write

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Sameer Ahmed 27 April 2009

The emptiness of soul has been described so vividly in this poem that it reflects a true charisma of love.....10/10

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Juneil Sechico 27 April 2009

nice write Fay...this is dinner not just dessert...! very gentle and expressive! 10+

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Fiona Davidson 26 April 2009

Beautiful write Fay...wonderful and gentle....Fi 10+++

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 26 April 2009

those u love and hu love u are truly special and loving..great write..u always are amazing! !

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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