Saturday, August 31, 2013

But A Moment Comments

Rating: 4.8

There is but a moment
That a human heart fully lives,
When thinking not of itself
And unconditionally gives -
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Smoky Hoss
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Noreen Carden 29 October 2013

Hello Smoky another wonderful poem with a great message

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Lawerence Mize 10 September 2013

Good write Smoky. I enjoyed this one.

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Joseph Anderson 02 September 2013

Some thoughts worth pondering, expressed with care and truthfulness. Sadly true to human nature Excellant rendering. A very passionate and sincere

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Heather Wilkins 01 September 2013

short but filled with good thoughts. better to give than to receive good write

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Hans Vr 31 August 2013

Wow, my friend, this is a short poem that really hits a fantastic truth Superbly written. Unconditional giving, unconditional love: I pray my heart can be filled with it and I can live according to these concepts But you are so right, the times we manage to give as such are but moments A great ten!

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