Monday, August 1, 2016

But A Candle Comments

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What if we are but a candle...lit the moment of our birth
Meant to flicker softly...and shine our light upon the earth?

And what if our lone candle...on the moment that we die...
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Jim Yerman
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Randhir Kaur 01 August 2016

WAOOO...that last couplet....so so..dmn touching...really a provoking line...we can shine..yes... Interesting poem....

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