Sunday, February 9, 2014

Busybees Abuzz With Life Comments

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(enjoy d puns)

I happen to be a busy bee
always racing with time
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s.zaynab kamoonpury
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Terry Craddock 03 September 2020

Just wrote and posted the poems 'Buying Time Buying Back Time', 'Buying Slices Of Time', 'We Can Buy Time If We Choose' and 'Would You Buy Back Past Time Lived At Any Cost? ' inspired by this poem and dedicated to the poet s zaynab kamoonpuri.

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Mohammed Jafer 24 February 2014

Awesome words, beautifully written. I like reading this poem again and again.

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Free Bird 22 February 2014

i like this one of you too: D simple and interesting : D

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Md Elias Uddin 21 February 2014

...let the time do the talk and still tell it it's simply brill! ENJOYED!

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Terry Craddock 16 February 2014

'I think I could buy me some extra time' interesting, we can buy time, which equates to time is money

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V P Mahur 16 February 2014

this is a nice poem. All wish are not fulfilled is the message of the poem. Great work.

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Md Asadullah 16 February 2014

This is your wonderful poem sister, I enjoyed it from beginin till end. Great theme, great poem :)

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Ken E Hall 15 February 2014

Time waits for no one and with no busy bees there would be no us... great tick tock read...regards

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R.benjamin Abate 13 February 2014

Very nice. Time keeps on going and going.

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Phillip Joshua Jimenez 13 February 2014

Truly, no money or effort can buy time back. Therefore, we are all advised to make the most out of every second that we have in this life because a second lost can never be brought back. I'm so amazed at the way you presented this wisdom. God bless you, my friend! : D

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Yusuf Rashid Pyrus 13 February 2014

Devil may-care tick tock yah, let the time do the talk yah you said it all i love it

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Jeri Martindale 12 February 2014

Time... My only enemy! ! ! I try my best to stop it, but like u said... It just keeps tick -tock in! !

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Adonis Enricuso 10 February 2014

amazing! speaks for a million souls...

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Noreen Carden 10 February 2014

Great poem and so true time does fly especially as we get older and as you sat time waits for no one

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Neela Nath Das 10 February 2014

Time is fav subject.To me time is healer time is killer.Fab poem.

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Dave Walker 09 February 2014

A really great poem, like it.

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