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i like this one, well written

Its quite insulting to see a girl your age writing an awesome poem like that.dont give up

Quite rightly written, thought provoking and alarming for our race.

Very true and philosophic poem. Nice work.

Your English is good and the poem moves along fine with a nice ending you have talent so read read a lot and the world is at your feet...regards

Never I find happiness, I am strictly a peace-seeker. Better ecstasy could substitute the happiness. Very well written turbulance of the existence and passion for the life beyond life. Your You is perfect in use as a last line. Beautiful. Yes, a you is must to exist and to swim the ocean of time.10 again out of ten as my liking. Regards, pranab

Very nice poem, this is truth of present day world, but life is beyond it as you correctly concluded