Thursday, November 3, 2016

Busy Lady Comments

Rating: 5.0

Garlic, oil, your skill and your trick,
I'm hungry, a quick service will click,
Wasting time in mayonnaise making,
Annoying is your prolonged baking,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Anil Kumar Panda 08 November 2016

Hahaha.....can't wait much longer. Very nice.Enjoyed.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 November 2016

A lady in family always takes care of food preparation for members of family. Preparing quick dishes is necessary to save time and serve busy persons. This poem reflects kitchen and its scenario interestingly. Amazing this is.10

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Rajnish Manga 04 November 2016

Wow.... You have beautifully captured the scene of a kitchen in a home. Members of the family from small kids to the grown ups have no patience when real hungry. Thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 04 November 2016

Is it directed to your sweet wife Akhtar ji? ?

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Akhtar Jawad 04 November 2016

Yes Valsa, I always advise her to make quick dishes instead of taking so much time to prepare an outstanding dish, specially for break fast.

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Khalid Saifullah 03 November 2016

All wives are like this, an intersecting poem.........................

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