Tuesday, October 30, 2012

Busy Bee Comments

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Im a busy wizzy bee,
Flies around the pretty wetty flowers,
With flitty flutty wings...

Im a busy wizzy bee,
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Sruthi Varma
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Rahul Sharma 23 February 2014

BEE gone so Busy...! ? Buzzy! ! Nicely penned down!

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Jahan Zeb 13 November 2012

The style, words collection, title everything about the poem is interest and very good. the pair of words in some lines suit the message of the poem. You are a good soul and you collect good and produce better. Good write

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Sarang Mangi 10 November 2012

love the title, .....

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