Friday, September 26, 2008

Busted Comments

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Busted wide open my hearts drips freely
Pain and despair I am down kneeling
Life without you will be short and stout
Long hours of drinking till my liver busts out
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Adam Day
Tears cut despair
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Fay Slimm 14 October 2008

The reader is made to feel the pain and frustration here very well Adam. You are applealing to the heart and of course that is the aim of love - even unrequited love. well penned.

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Egi David Perdana 26 September 2008

lovely poems, great stanza welcome my pal!

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Adam Day

Adam Day

whiting Indiana
Adam Day
Adam Day
whiting Indiana
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