Sunday, October 7, 2007

Bussie Comments

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They called her Bussie, dumpie with acne
so nobody kissed her.
A matinee groupie who seldom saw a film.
The only tenderness she knew was
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jerry hughes
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You first sent this to me about a year ago I think. I is utterly heartwrenching; all-too-realistic; and written with the finest of pens. t x

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Alison Cassidy 07 October 2007

With a minimum of words, you have produced a detailed and sensitive portrait of Bussie with her acne and her need to be loved. Oh the agony of feminine plainness. I've no doubt the 'callous youths' didn't give her feelings a second thought. This is incredibly sad - and beautifully written. love, Allie xxxx

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