Wednesday, March 12, 2014

Business Of Business Comments

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Business of being busy
Is the greatest business
For, it never likes a man
To show any idleness
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V P Mahur
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Jasbir Chatterjee 13 March 2014

I liked the way you began this poem, Business of being busy is the greatest business... Good poem, can be polished a bit more...

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Siyana (UP) , Bulandshahr, India
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