Business Is Business Comments

Sandra, your imagery is fantastic and made this poem come alive. As I read I was there viewing what you had written. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

An eye opener for me Sandra. I would not have thought of this happening. I learn so much from this site. A well written and informative piece. 10 love Karin

For them 'Business is business' Irrespective of the place or situation .................. We have also these kind of persons here, Sandra.

you really bring out the the scene outside temples vividly. last lines sum it all up businesslike. there is a touch of irony, humour, resignation and cynicism here. nature trampled, frenzy of devout, hawkers making livelihood- a truly realistic pictureSandra. Mamta

you really bring out the the scene outside temples vividly. last lines sum it all uo businesslike. there is a touch of irony, humour, resignation and cynicism here. nature trampled, frenzy of devout, hawkers making livelihood- a truly realistic pictureSandra. Mamta

It is good...........................

I have read your poem without reading it because it is unreadable. Now, you read my poem 'A battle Cry' equally unreadable, because bussiness is bisiness. :)) PS It is just a click up your poem!

thats a business for money only no matter who they take good write 10