Saturday, September 3, 2005

Bush Mechanic Ingenuity Comments

Rating: 5.0

The cursin’ and the swearin’ could be heard for miles around
As the bush mechanic worked and toiled with great gusto and great sound
There were problems with the thing-a-majig and the whatsit gismo failed
And he couldn’t fix the flamin’ thing no matter how he wailed
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Don Stratford
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Ernestine Northover 07 October 2005

Now this could be my husband when he starts tinkering with things. Well done. Sincerely Ernestine

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Kelly Allen Vinal 03 September 2005

Speaks to the specialized abilities of those we least suspect. Well done!

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A Harrie 03 September 2005

very good! I got lost a bit in the middle on the first read, perhaps a missing comma or two? well enjoyed it though. Amanda

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Mary Nagy 03 September 2005

Very entertaining Don. Great poem. sincerely, Mary

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