Wednesday, June 7, 2006

Burying Me Alive Comments

Rating: 5.0

The emptiness inside keeps growing
Clausterphobia from the inside, I'm choking
I can hardly breathe anymore
I feel trapped, The nothingness is spreading
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Gabriella Franco
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Leo Lopes 06 August 2006

Yeah i feel ya babe... it's tryin 2 kill me too

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fine work, young lady...stellar use of imagery...tight, crisp structure, smooth fluxion; rhythm impressively in sync...job well done, gabriella '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~f. j. r.~''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

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Uriah Hamilton 07 June 2006

I'd like to say it gets better with age, but it doesn't.

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