Tuesday, October 7, 2008

(bury The Pains) Comments

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If I have made a promise to you
And that I have not fulfill it through
Please forgive me and forget my failure
Bury the pain; I will deliver it in the future
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Reshma Ramesh 10 November 2008

hmmm we can meand our ways for the ones we love.......good write

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Indira Renganathan 13 October 2008

Not ways of escapism but honest love I suppose..nice poem 10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 08 October 2008

loyalty to love significant. fine composition.......10+

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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