Monday, December 17, 2007

Bury My Name Under Your Tongue Comments

Rating: 4.8

Bury my name under your tongue
the way I will bury yours
because if my name escapes your lips
surely your heart will call out to mine
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shannon wright
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Chinedu Dike 05 February 2018

A well texted, nicely thought-out poem. Deep feelings elegantly encapsulated from the heart. Thanks for sharing.

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Roger Cornish 18 January 2008

This is just sooooo good! Rogerx.

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Dewald Viljoen 15 January 2008

wow...this is the kind of poem that haunts my dreams. - Dewald

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Jurietta Duraan 10 January 2008

Shannon this is beautiful... I am sorry I have not read your poems before - Yuri

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Ivan Donn Carswell 07 January 2008

Fine imagery, the feeling comes through powerfully! Rgds, Ivan

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Kefentse Sathekge 26 December 2007

captivating. love your fresh outlook.

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Ramendra Kumar 23 December 2007

Beautiful poem Shannon. These words will remain with me for a long, long time.

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Fred Babbin 17 December 2007

You have touched me.

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